Lights Out

by Lu   May 21, 2007


Scented candles dance upon walls
lights out darling
Sing to me a little song sweet love
sonnet perhaps
Sprinkle lilac kisses on silky flesh
breathe my soul
Lay upon a bed of scented passion
taste thy nectar
Moans escape, inner peace found
depths explored
Pleasures found, breathing rapid
heart pounding
Inhaling intensified, exhaling love
soul rejuvenated
Beautiful blessed child conceived
candle flickers
Good-night sweet love, lights out ...

~*~* For a poetry contest ~*~*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was a totally awesome poem of deep love a mind blower , I love it , great job it was short ,sweet and well expressed, keep up the good work , your friend Tracy

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    This was a beautiful use of imagery to describe the act of making love. It brought so much romance to the forefront and really spoke of how women wish it to be and to feel. Speaking only for women that is....
    What a superb write with such wonderful flow and imagery.
    Great Job,
    Kay

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    Your poems are always so beautiful. Imagery is wonderful.

    Take care
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Luanne,

    This is such a romatic piece and has a very dreamy quality to it. Lovely, one melts into the flow of the words.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

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