Comments : Lost (Etheree)

  • 16 years ago

    by The Unwritten Love

    Hey . nice one keep it going :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Mohamed
    How beautiful your Etheree. You did an amazing job on this poetry form. Excellent word choices and Imagery. Thank you for saying I inspired you. That meant so much to me :)
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful , good work 5/5
    I'll appreciate your comment and rating my poems

    I added u to my favorite poets .. ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I thought this was a good peom.. it flows well.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSilentlyScreamingxx

    Beautiful poem, lovely imagery in it :D
    keep it up!
    Amy x
    thanks for my comment :)

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    I liked this one. nicely written. the word choice was nicely done, and i liked the image i saw.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was a hard structure but you were able to do it well done! well penned! choice of words was amazing! keep up the good work! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful Ethree!..well written peice..excellent job....well chosen words...there is perfection n beauty in every line=)
    Great job!
    5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice
    i loved it
    your poems are so amazing
    great work

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I thought this was awesome - it didn't even seem like u were deliberately following a format! i want to try an etheree - i'll be lucky if mines half as good as yours, if i can even write one! 5/5
    ~claire

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Etheree! This form is koOL i suppose nw i wil try to write my own. This is superb dear.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    The form was done rather well, I myself had always had a problem with perfect form but you pulled it off great in this peice the message again was lovely and it was a delight to read Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I like this type of poem
    5/5 great sense of emotion
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I haven't written an etheree before. I like the idea of writting structured poems. I think it's a great challenge. From what I see you did a great job with this poem. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Excellent job with this piece, although it was short the emotion was very deep and the style was unique. Fantastic job with this piece 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    What a beautiful Etheree.
    I've never wrote one, but maybe I'll give it a try someday.
    Yours was just great.
    Filled with emotions and a very good flow.
    A pleasure to read like the rest of your work.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Such a beautiful Etheree you have written here. The love behind this touched my heart as i'm sure it did many others. I loved how your pieces are unique in their own way. A good word choice which were created into such sweet simplicity. Well done on this gorgeous poem keep it up. Look forward to reading more from you. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Shortly but very well express......

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Again another real nice love poem, i like the way chose styles and themes for your poems xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I said it before and i'll keep saying it. you have such a wonderful talent with your words and everyone poem i read, i believe it more and more. this was such a beautiful etheree, and it was well expressed, loved it 5/5

    nikki