Waiting

by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere   May 21, 2007


Waiting

You know how you can wait for the time to come,
But yet it passes all together,
Time never seems to wait,
And time never seems to stop.

The hours and the minutes tick by,
But never knowing how they pass,
When you're just sitting there,
Waiting for something to happen.

You can stare into space,
Trying to glimpse at just one thing,
To tell you that just once,
The time went by.

You wait so patiently,
Yet you wait for so long,
The minutes pass by fast,
And the hours pass on long and slow.

We live in the minutes and hours,
Of different days,
Never knowing how they past,
Just how they change us everyday.

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  • 16 years ago

    by dawn green

    Good write! god bless!

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    You have a really gopod perspective and that is what tells who you are.. this poem is something I never thought of writing.. you have inspired me to write something that I never thought of writing before.. good job and yet keep up the amazing good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sandra D

    I like this one! it had a wonderful flow, it was overall a beautiful piece! i LOVE the ending, it's totally the best part! great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    The theme in it was great! And it was so true. Great flow and just amazing poem! Keep up the great work!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!!....beautiful beautiful work...the
    "We live in the minutes and hours,
    Of different days,
    Never knowing how they past,
    Just how they change us everyday"
    I loved this stanza...specially the first 2 lines...n the flow was flawless...n i soo loved the ending.....
    Great wrk!5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

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