GREY

by Austin   May 22, 2007


I'm tired of all the do this
I'm tired of all the do thats
Figure out what you want
Get your life on track
I'm tired of all the plans
And tired of all the hustle
Tired of all go go go
Tired of all the bustle
I don't want to run away
And I don't want to scream
But there's got to be a better way
Of getting the all American dream
The ones your parents use to always talk about
The dream from their past
I want my own dream
Staring my own cast
So I'm tired of all the yes'
And tired of all the no's
This isn't the life I want
This isn't the life I chose
So I'll sit here and wait
For the hopes of a better day
And I'll live my life
With a little extra Grey

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  • 11 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Maybe Gray is the wrong paintbrush color.

    This is the GREAT POEM!

    Please read my poem

    White Paintbrushes as it makes the perfect
    response to your poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    I really really liked this poem.. especially the lines..
    "So I'm tired of all the yes'
    And tired of all the no's
    This isn't the life I want
    This isn't the life I chose"

    I agree with everything in your poem.. great job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Maybe you should add in a quotation
    In the "do this" and "do thats"
    Get your life on track seems pretty
    Random.
    Staring
    It's starring, dearest :]
    What does a little extra grey mean, exactly?
    I'm a bit curious :P
    All in all, it was pretty good.
    Your format wasn't great
    And so was your spelling.
    But I felt raw emotion from this.
    All in all, I give you a 4 :]

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