Ouch (Oddquain)

by Lu   May 22, 2007


Oddquain:

The Oddquain form is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting
of seventeen syllables distributed 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines, developed by Glenda L. Shank.

bang
swollen pain
purple, black and blue
apply ice upon thy knee
bruise

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Your right unusual but still had a great point to it, so that makes sense to me, great job, your friend Tracy

  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    This is absolutely adorable.

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Ouch! The title says it all and the images remind me of the pain of too many accidents

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    I love this :) I needed a giggle tonight...Or should I say this morning. Another sleepless night. Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Ouuuch! Painful but such a cute poem!

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