Suicide

by Vladimir Lorenzo   May 23, 2007


My heart has stopped beating
My eyes are closed shut
No noises are audible
My wrists have been cut
Blood pours from my viens
An abstract picture appears
Friends and Family come in
Faces swollen with fear
My note sits on the counter
The bidding of my farewell
An outcast to society
I drift and you dwell
Dwell upon me with your eyes
As I begin to sleep
Your torment and your pain
With no words, it all speaks
No longer shall I cry
No longer may I fear
For my life is no longer
A life you have to bear

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  • 14 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Absolutely amazing. I've felt like this many times, thought of the mere idea, and sometimes I still do. I still use the blade as my escape.
    I hope that you begin to realize the beautiful world around you. It'd be horrible to lose someone with such a talent.

    "No longer shall I cry
    No longer may I fear
    For my life is no longer
    A life you have to bear "

    Loved those lines there.
    Keep up the great work!
    5/5

    -Ally

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony Gonzalez

    Wahhhhh!!!! u made me sad!!!...i miss u dude!!! (no homo)

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony Gonzalez

    Wow vlad!!! people do care...contemplatin suicide is never the best!!

  • 16 years ago

    by fatal bliss is the best way to die

    Wow this is really good keep it up ~melissa~ oh ya 5/5 maybe you can check out some of my poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Alex

    Wow, you're very good at writing poems haha. I give this a 5/5. Nice job.

    ~*Alex*~

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