Painted Sky

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   May 26, 2007


A beautiful dreamland,
A peaceful get-away,
Alone underneath
A Painted Sky.

Laying on the rooftop
Of a weathered cottage,
Witnessing natural beauty
Only to be found here.

Against the midnight sky,
Streaks of vivid colors
Weave through the dark blanket,
Painting a shower of jewels.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awe, that's very descriptive and very beautiful at the same time.
    Gorgeous writing you have here; I'm really at loss for words.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Really, This is an amazing piece. I found it to be quite peaceful the flow spot on and the word choice really effective and strong. It seemed all so beautiful to me. I hope you gave this to your friend as it is a great read and i'm sure they would love it as much as I did. Good work~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I loved the imagery you used in the poem. I could clearly see everything you described in the last stanza of the poem. You used strong vocabulary, and it had a nice flow to it. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    A beautiful free verse poem...
    the words you use here are really strong and help to show the beauty of what you wish to describe...
    i really like this...
    i love the sky (especially at night...)
    =)
    5/5
    *isabel*

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    After the "A Painted Sky"
    I can actually hear a pause in the ending.
    Then the drummings.
    You make it syllabolic.
    A Painted... Sky.

    What I think?
    I think this is wonderful.
    It's not original.
    But I found a rhythm to this.
    I only find it in good poetry.
    Lol.
    So. Give it to him.
    I bet he'd like it as much as I did :]

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