My Give A Damn Busted

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   May 27, 2007


Go ahead baby, sell your soul to the girl next door,
You said it yourself, hunny, you're not commercial wh0re.
You can walk around with your cocky head stuck up high,
But your good looks and shoes alone just won't get you by.

There's something about you that strikes my eyes and pulls me in,
But I'm scared to open up and let the words whisper that you sin.
There's just something about the way you smile that breaks my heart,
You think you've got enough to make it happen but you aren't that smart.

But, go ahead baby, sell your soul to the girl next door,
You said it yourself, hunny, you're not commercial wh0re.

You aggravate me to the point of extinction and the frustration grows,
You've got such a pretty face and it's something you know.
Don't use your ideas and back them into me,
Take the deep breaths your counselor taught you and count to three.

But, go ahead baby, sell your soul to the girl next door,
You said it yourself, hunny, you're not commercial wh0re.

There's so much more to these feelings, oh how you frustrate me so,
But something about your nature that makes me want to get to know.

Just go ahead baby, sell your soul to the girl next door,
You said it yourself, hunny, you're not commercial wh0re.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Synh

    'You aggravate me to the point of extinction'

    hahaha, by far, the GREATEST part of this poem.

    I hate when beautiful people know their beautiful and feel the need to tell everyone. It's one of the most assinine things a person can do and it annoys me to no end. I love you deeply. Seriously, this poem is the ultimate 'I Hate Beautiful People' thing I've ever seen in my life. 5/5 lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    'But, go ahead baby, sell your soul to the girl next door,
    You said it yourself, hunny, you're not commercial wh0re.'
    ^ My favorite lines

    Amazing poem.
    Great wording, and flow.
    Nothing wrong with it that I seen.
    Keep it up. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Another interesting piece. The emotion is bitter, and I always love reading about bitterness and downright annoyance.

    The flow was wonderful, word usage, structure, everything - I loved it.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Awshit. she called me an aropant a hole. xD this is my mahfawkin poem. that isn't exactly good. but now that we're okay...ian is a;;mahfawkin killer, with my shoes.

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Sheena, I really liked this poem. The repetition of the lines really added emphasis to the whole thing. The title reallly dragged me in and the whole poem was well done. The ryhme was good and the flow was flawless. :]

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