The Chaos Serenade

by The Black Angel Lloyd Rose   May 27, 2007


All of my dreams vanish into thin air,
Of all my friends only few seem to care.
All my life I have dealt with this.
All eternity; searching for bliss.
All of these scars still bleed in my heart,
All of these plans I will never start.
All my fears slowly begin to manifest,
All these years only to fail this test.
All these problems solved with the blade,
All this combined: the chaos serenade.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    WOW!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!...beautiful...simple yet so so beautiful
    Excellent choice of words put to togther to convey deep emotions...n i flowed well...
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  • 16 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this poem... Emotional and deep, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by LITTLE MISS FREAKING SUNSHINE

    I really liked it. It was really simple, yet the words were so powerful, and the end!!! LOVE! No, in a seriousness, It was very good, very moving, and I'll tell you now... Keep Writing!!! You are very good
    ~Danielle~

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