Baby, We Can Make This Work

by BrixGoesxRawr   May 28, 2007


Distance isn't going to separate us

we'll find a way to see each other

I will not let you go now

baby, we can make this work

we can talk on the phone all the time

and see each other every once in a while

we can e-mail each other, write letters

baby, we can make this work

I'll still draw pictures for you

and wear your jacket all the time

I think about you all day long

baby, we can make this work

I will not let you walk out of my life

no, not when I'm finally happy

you're mine to have, and to keep

baby, we can make this work

yeah, it's gonna be really hard

we may start to fight a little

but, if we work really hard at it

and we both want it..

baby, we can make this work

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    Wow...
    I really liked it..
    Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    Omg Excellent!!!
    i loved it!!
    5/5
    -Liz

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    And I wear your jacket all the time
    ^ I think this would sound better without the "I" but that's just my opinion.

    Awhh, thats so sweet hunnyy. I love how much emotion was in such a few simple wordss. We could feel your love and your sadness that he was gonee. I love the descriptions and imagery throughout. Lovely jobb. 5/5