Suicidal King And Queen.

by Teria   May 28, 2007


Stormed in on a rainy night,
causing the flood to end in fright.
The waters trembled, the tears fell
until Sunday morning she heard the church bell.
A shot whiskey, she awoke in pain.
They always said she'd end insane.

Pointless fights, meaningless times
have become a suicidal queens last lines.
She's taken too much too far away,
she's ready to die this very day.
With a few last words, she falls down..
Ending her life with evils sound.

" It's girls like me
that fall and break.
Slowly tend to
never awake.
Pierce the hearts
of the most loved,
and take the minds
from heaven above."

Slowly she unleashed a piercing cry..
realizing the shot wasn't good enough for her to die.
In pain she laid, for the hours she spent..
forgetting the reasons of which life was meant.
She drifted off into a fantasy world,
took her heart and gave it a whirl.

Remembering..
It's girls like her,
that rip their heart in two.
'Cause it's girls like her
that fall for you.
The suicidal king
that no one ever knew

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  • 16 years ago

    by George

    Touching...very touching. It was a very emotional piece which I enjoyed very much! Sadly, there were some parts where the flow was a bit awkward I though...but maybe thats just me...nice job though!

  • 16 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Wonderful poem. amazing flow and so much emotion. well done.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ~Chelsea

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Perfectly penned superb write!
    U've captured the emotions so very well n the good choice of words have added to the poem's beauty...excellen flow...with great rhyme scheme...all in all...no errors as far as i m concerned....very well done!...heartfelt write!
    5/5!=)

    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well written take a bow, you have stolen the show Amazing flow, perfectly penned, deep emtion, brillant word choice, really really well done. keep up the amazing work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Quietly Crushed

    I am so sad now it made me cry it was AWESOME so keep it up :)