You've Become

by xoxShorteexox   Jun 1, 2007


You've become the only thing,
that keeps me sane.
When I feel like I'm falling,
you always seem to catch me.

You've become my light,
through total darkness.
When I feel so low,
you always make me feel special.

You've become everything I need,
and you've even more.
When I feel uncomfortable,
you always make me feel safe.

You've become my everything,
I don't want to lose this feeling.
When I get scared of losing you,
you always say, "I love you."

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  • 18 years ago

    by ABake

    I love the emotion of this poem, it's semi-
    short and sweet. I ecspecially like this stanza
    "You've become my everything,
    I don't want to lose this feeling.
    When I get scared of losing you,
    you always say, "I love you."
    It really gives a good closing to the poem. If you understand what I mean. SOme poems leave you kind of hanging in a way.But I don't feel that way here!
    Great Job
    *Amber*

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Uber sweeeeeet!

    =]

    The third stanza lacked flow.
    While the rest had a certain flow to it.
    But still adorable.

    Glad your happy, babe.
    You deserve it.

    Lovce you so much =]

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