A mid summer night's dream !

by chavii   Jun 2, 2007


An angelic whisper melts in my ear,
awakening me from my deep slumber.
Perplexed , i look around
but find trace of no living creature.
Little disappointed and half confused
i look outside the window.
and get greeted by the majestic full moon
Admiring the balmy serene night
my face get caressed by escatic breeze passing by.
Momentarily making me part of a surreal dream.
The night transforms itself in a charming prince,
and gazes lovingly at me as moonlit.
The rhythmical breeze becomes his love sonnets,
inviting me to dance with heavenly glee.
Lost in my sweet dream i dance and dance
holding hands of my invisible imaginary prince.
But soon the magic fades away ,
bringing me back to reality, my empty room.
The night becomes dark and still
making my heart ache with loneliness and grief.
For moment i wished it was real
and not just another mid summer night's dream.

--chavii--

P.S. Dear friends thank you for encouraging me to write again .I'm still struggling with writers block and this is very lousy attempt :P

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Do u know what i liked most..about this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    If this is a result of writing block and lousy attempt then keep writing chavii! Wonderful poem... Great imagination... Well done... Impressed!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    This is a great attempt, if at all to call it an attempt, it was a lovely piece of poetry, you have long been undiscovered by myself and many other poets, you are really talented, and i really enjoyed this poem great work! xox lithium

  • 16 years ago

    by WRITING IS MY ESCAPE

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  • 16 years ago

    by N3Na

    I like it, its better than mine 5/5