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by chavii Jul 25, 2007
Life, society /
meaning of life
Profound happiness shimmers on her exhausted face,
As she is handed over her first born after three hours
of extreme labour pains.
Hundreds of mixed feelings rushes through her veins,
Seeing in flesh the life she has nutured inside her for thirty eight long weeks.
The pains and hardships she has endured to bring this new life,
is now transformed into a mother's everlasting maternal pride.
The woman inside her now feels complete.--chavii--
by alka mendiratta
How true, a woman feels complete when she gives birth to a new life.The feelings are penned beautifully.
I love this! It's just so beautiful. You describe the joys of becoming a mother perfectly. :] Just wonderful! 5.5
"The woman inside her now feels complete."
^ && I love the way you ended the poem... it sort of sums up the entire poem within one line. Lovely job!
- Stephyy <3
Chavii, beautiful work, love the the flow and use of words here. A clear and descriptive piece. Well done! Greta. xox
The woman inside her now feels complete.
^This sums it up.....the birth of a child is the ultimate spiritual exoerience....and the ultimate love....I remember the birth of my first....never thought it was possible to love someone so much......beautiful poem.....All the best, Debbie