The Golden Evening queen.

by chavii   Jul 31, 2007


A beautiful Cloud is led by the wind to the blue dance floor,
Draped in white silk, she looks like an angel send from above.

Dancing gracefully, she seems to float weightlessly beyond horizon,
Mystifying the onlookers, she filled each mind with awe.

The retiring king, sun, too starts admiring the white beauty,
And as a welcome gesture showers grandly on her , his golden beams.

Illuminating the white body of hers into that of a sparkling golden evening queen,
Becoming an inspiration for a poem, to a poetess beneath.

--chavii--

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  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    This was absolutely stunning. I fell in love with this after i read the first line. I like the structure of it and i like how you mentioned that it was an inspiration to you. Yet another beautiful write from you. Thank you for the comment on mine :)
    thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    This is defo going on my faves!!
    Wow, you should be so proud of this one, such a beautiful nature piece..
    Very unique!
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Very good write my friend. beautiful smooth flow. 5/5 from me. ben thompson

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    I love the title of this poem and even better the poem itself a lovely lil piece great work xox sam

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