Refusing to let go

by Amanda Cleveland   Jun 3, 2007


On the top of a mountain
It’s all so clear
This is where I belong
My heart is up here

Then I slip on a rock
Fall all the way down
Crashing at the bottom
And breaking my crown

You give me your hand
Help me to the top
Then push me back over
This really needs to stop

Seems like you lead me on
Just to push me away
Real me in again and again
Just to throw me back all day

What’s the point in this
Why do it to me
There’s a pain in my heart
The tears cant you see

I wanna give up on you
I just want you to know
That I’ve fallen for you
And I cant let go

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Love the first two stanzas...great write 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    I could feel it all happening, I could feel the pain.

    You give me your hand
    Help me to the top
    Then push me back over
    This really needs to stop

    This was my fav bit coz i know exactly how this feels. great work

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    I love this poem its very very good

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    I love this poem its very very good

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I love the second to last verse, and i agree with emma - great metaphor. definitely a 5/5!