Mother's watch

by Reminders Torture   Jun 3, 2007


Sitting here beside you,mom.
death's doorstep you lay.
set me head upon your wrist.
i bow my head to pray.

i block out all my pain.
concentrating on deeply.
the tick your watch reveals.
and loss i'm sure to feel.

the time for you is near.
to enter the heaven's gate.
i would sit here by your side.
until our journey is complete.

months have passed since you've gone.
my wounds are still healing slow.
i would do so much to hear your voice.
seeing your smile glow!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    Wow that was rlly good!

    the time for you is near.
    to enter the heaven's gate.
    i would sit here by your side.
    until our journey is complete.

    ^that was so amazing... i loved that stanza.. wonderful job, and thanks for the comments... 5/5 from me, and keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Albert

    This is so heart coldening

    i love it so much

    it made me cry

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    Very nice, 5/5

    i love your poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Aww that was a nice poem... i lyk it 2... 5/5 :) oh by d way Ems thx 4 d comment on mine.. ^____^ laterz

  • 18 years ago

    by Darkening Dawn

    Stunning poem. i really like it. You're a talented poet. Keep writing. All the best.

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