The Angel of Death

by Karl Wild GG23   Jun 4, 2007


Seems like yesterday, but it was long ago,
Pictures cover his walls like a shrine,
Sits in the dark, with the radio playing low,
Trying to find answers in a bottle of wine.

Searching for shelter in every glass,
Hoping, to raid another night of sorrow,
Clock stands still, minutes don't pass,
Coping, to aid a less painful tomorrow.

The violent images replay in his mind,
Over and over as he watches them die,
Beaming truck lights, turn his eyes blind,
Screaming with hatred, please God why?

In his eyes, the enemy stands by the door,
See's a dark shadow, the angel of death,
The bottle slips, crashing to the wooden floor,
Frantic gasps, try to provide a critical breath.

Memories so fond, grow dark and bleak,
The melody of the music begins to fade,
Opening his mouth, but unable to speak,
knows this time, death he cannot evade.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I can honestly say I loved every part of this poem. The meaning is creative and expressed well... the emotion is slightly hidden, yet apparent enough to be understood.

    A definite 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gerard Kurt

    Scary. You really have a gift in writing. Could you read my poems and tell me what you think of them?

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    OMG I loved it especially this stanza:
    In his eyes, the enemy stands by the door,
    See's a dark shadow, the angel of death,
    The bottle slips, crashing to the wooden floor,
    Frantic gasps, try to provide a critical breath.

    That is very deep to me. And very nice flow. I voted 5/5. Nicley penned love!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I like a lot this poem.Congratulations,you have done a great work.Take good care of you.Best regards,Michelle.XxX