Low lifes

by bleeding limegrenn   Jun 7, 2007


Every one just sits and talks
but you only think there talking
when there making for of you
is it how i dress
am i fat
or is it I'm not as rich as every one lets

i this there a bunch of low liefs
with so many imperfections they take it out on others

they like to bring people down
as once a great friend said" why can't we be friends"
i try to bring people up
to try to convince people that these other are just as good as them

its not just one or two people its a whole school

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    There are some mistakes in this poem, but once you know what it is supposed to be it sounds great. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    "i this there a bunch of low liefs" there couple of mistakes in this line. You gotta check it out. Nevertheless this piece is worth 5/5. Your selection of words are nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    I like your style of writing its very honest, and address real life problems which occur in almost every day life, which is a rare thing to find in poetry. Being able to take an everyday occurance and make it sound beautiful is a gift. I like this poem and how real and honest it is.
    Geo

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