You and Me?

by Delie   Jun 8, 2007


You and Me?

So this is goodbye.
I'll miss seeing those eyes.
And the warmth of your smile,
That I could feel from a mile.

The thought of you leaving,
Makes me feel like grieving.
The tears stroll down my face,
Faster and faster; at a higher pace.

While crying I see,
All the love you gave to me.
And inside I still feel hope,
Enough to help me cope.

Then,
In my lonely bed I dream,
Of a truly amazing scheme,
Where you'll give me a kiss,
And everything will restore to it's eternal bliss.

Everynight I'll make my wish,
For all the bad to be demolished.
I'll wait and wait...
Though every second apart, I'll hate and hate.

Waiting for that last school day,
Where [I'm wishing], you'll tell me everything'll be okay.
Then you'll tell me, what will turn out to be,
Of my dreams, of you and me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well structured with good flow and emotion.
    a truly amazing piece
    love always, Tara-Kay
    xxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    Good poem. especially liked:
    "The tears stroll down my face,
    Faster and faster; at a higher pace."

    "And inside I still feel hope,
    Enough to help me cope."

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Interesting. It seemed abit rough at the start but then the emotion beacame stronger and dragged you in more. Nice poem well written very heartfelt and i enjoyed it alot :) well done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    It has been awhile since you post a poem, but i think it was a perfect one, you have done a wonderful like always.
    so glad to read it. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. At first I thought that the flow would be off because some of the lines were a little longer than the rest but it turned out alright. I liked the word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

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