Notice

by Delie   May 19, 2007


Notice

behind the laughter and the smiles,
do you notice anything?
do you notice the tears in her eyes?
do you notice the scars on her heart?
do you notice the 'blah' in her step;
where there used to be some spring?
do you notice the gray clouds above her head?
do you notice the smile fading?
do you see her crying?
do you? do you even notice her?
do you notice the way she glimpses your way?
do you notice her smile, when she see you?
do you notice the happiness in her words;
when you're online?
do you notice that girl?
that girl,
that would do anything for you,
just to make you happy.
that girl,
that girl is your BEST FRIEND.
do you notice her now?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Oh wow...these thoughts have probably run through every girls mind before about some guy or another ! lol it awesome..deep and lovely jubbly =]
    keep it up
    nuff luv xx

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    This is great.. i feel this way.. this guy that i really like well yeah.. sometimes i just want him to notice me.. anyway it was really good.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Truly great, i like the way you asked some questions as everyone of us should ask ourselves, do we have someone like that in our life that we didnt notice????????
    you make me think.
    great job, a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

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