The End

by Delie   Jul 1, 2007


The End

When I look into your eyes,
Do you know what I see?
I see a story of long ago,
The time of you and me.

Those hazel eyes,
They speak to me.
They're trying to show,
Of when we were young and free.

The time of best friends,
When we were really tight.
You stabbed me in the back,
And we ended in one big fight.

You seemed not to comprehend,
Thought you still had all the might.
But we stopped all the attacks,
That for once was our right.

Then we cried words we couldn't say,
Words known as tears.
We struggled throughout the week,
But washed away all our fears.

I still think of you everyday,
Even though everything is so clear.
We can now take your critique.
We'll keep our friends that are dear.

Goodbye,
This is the end,
The end of this fray.

**tried something weird, sorry if it makes little sense.
my scheme: Abcb/Abcb/Defe/Defe/Hiji/Hiji/ADH
comments?
**Vino said he's seen nothing like it before.
Did i just 'invent' a new scheme. baha. imma name it Delaide. lol sounds cool.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked the rhyme scheme, it was different.
    you did a good job on this, a very good piece
    love Tara-Kay
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is unique i never seen something like this. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Dear this was another great poem by you. keep it up as always.

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