Why Do I Feel Like This?

by Kristina   Jun 8, 2007


I hate how I feel so depressed,
But yet nothing is even wrong.
I don't understand why I feel like this,
I wish these thoughts would go away.

Suicide is what is on my mind,
Everywhere I go and everything I do,
I think about it, it won't leave me alone,
It just follows me around.

I was so happy and now I am sad.
Within a couple of seconds,
My heart went from whole to pieces.
I think something is wrong with me.

Copyright © May 11, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Again the ending wasnt as strong as it should have been
    i mean the poem itself was great
    but the ending wasnt good enough

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    I think we all have these moments that we feel depressed, and I really like how you put that in a poem =] so nice poem! ^^ Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow splendid. Very well described how your life has changed and how grief has dominated your life. Another outstanding poem from you. Great indeed. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Hold on there. I feel your pain. This poem spoke to me differently than any other poem I've read lately. You did a wonderful job.
    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was an interesting read. I liked the meaning of which you portrayed really well. The flow was great and your word choice simple yet effective holding such emotion which was strong powerful and in real depth. This was quite a beautiful read which you have here. Well done on writing an exceptional sad poem~mel

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