The Dark

by Reminders Torture   Jun 8, 2007


No stars in the sky,nobody there,nobody around.
nobody wants to listen,no-one is awake.
i can't see anything but except my own face.
I'm just lost in this dark,in their own world.

dark is here,the dark comes and goes.
when the dark is here,I'm so depressed.
I'm so sad that the dark is here along with me.
the dark mirror,where no light can be reached.

don't leave alone in this dark and horror.round,
half the corners,exploring the limit,under covers.
but the darkness will be here with me all day.
before the people are awake from their sleep.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Really good poem, I like the choice of words in it, and every stanza holds a lot of darkened emotions.
    Well done, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Great wording i liked it so dark and deep my 2 fav subjects 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    Thanks for commenting my stuff, so I thought I'd return the favour. I'm truly honoured to be the first one to comment this poem lol.

    Well, i gave it a 5/5 for good writing no mistkes and a excellent word flow. I absolutely loved the line that said: " i can't see anything but except my own face. " brilliant.

    Loved it

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