Forever yours [Acrostic]

"Yours eyes attract me to live with you
Openness of your heart makes me romantic
Under the blanket of blue sky
Real love looks like a red rose
Staying with you, I am forever yours"

This is is absolutely the sweetest poem of the sweetest. I really like the expression "Under the blanket of blue sky, Real love looks like a red rose.." I kind of imagine some kind of post card with red rose and dark blue sky..

I really enjoy reading this, I nearly felt it was me who thinking this... Excellent. :D

This poem is really beautifully written. Atmosphere is great, wording is also excellent. It is short but very powerful. It really deserves 5/5

I always love the concept of an acrostic poem..namely because theres few rules to it with respect to rhyming..some actually do find that difficult..evidently you didnt, because it turned out amazing..keep up the great work!

Wow that was really sweet. The ending was superb :) I love it! Flow was smooth, good choice of words.

5/5

Once more a really touching peice of writing. I can feel the emotion your displaying in this peace. It works well. I liked how you described love, and how you feel about it. Love poems intrest me becuase to be honest im not even sure love exists so reading them makes me wonder. Its good you put in red rose as it is a simbel of love but it is a little cliche as well. To improve your writing i suggest you use punctuation. It coould help your work as the reader reads the poem the way you want it to be read. Keep writing! xx