The omens of death

by deathdealer   Jun 9, 2007


The trickle of sweat
the conscious regret
these things come to haunt
and taunt

the beckoning call of death
the whisper of doom
messages from the tomb

as you lie in bed
you know its not long beforeyour..
DEAD

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  • 16 years ago

    by purplified

    Again another excellent piece of work...your poems are something else I love them :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    I liked the theme. =] You have established a momentum at the beginning in which I especially admired. The imagery and rhythm were presented well and splendidly penned, whereas the concluding lines need to be more coherent and relevant along with the other stanzas. I'm looking forward of a revision of this piece, though.

    Nice work, nonetheless. Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by young and innocent

    Short but good
    5/5
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Again
    Nice work
    Nice Rhyme
    Nice Flow
    Good Work
    5/5

    Keep Smiling x

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi lee

    Wow, that was really good

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