Mommy

Nice poem! =O I wrote something like this.. it's called Dear Mama.. could you read and comment as well? =)
xxx

Awww its so sweet especially as it portrays a little girl wondering about her mother 5/5 keep writing

I love how you always seem to make the words flow together so good and your choices of words is really good too =) Another short one full of sadness and pain ^_^ 5/5
Rhea