Find Me A Shortcut To A Blessing [Or Maybe Just Your Kiss]

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jun 11, 2007


I want to write you a love poem, baby,
But who likes the cliche topics?
I'm in love with you and that's all you need.

I'll give you everything you want and maybe, just maybe,
The cliche words will go away; we'll put them in our pockets
For a later day when we run out of words.

Kiss me in a field of fireflies as they steal our breath,
I'm not scared because you're there to hold me
And you can caress me as the stars caress the moon during their love.

Find me a shortcut to a blessing, or maybe just your kiss,
I'm lost inside your mind; how it comforts me,
Let's dance in the rain with fireflies as our only light.

Find me a smile you can place on my face;
Though it won't be hard [just whisper in my ear]
And find me a shortcut to a blessing, or maybe just your kiss.

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  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Wow, some of the images in this were beautiful:

    "Let's dance in the rain with fireflies as our only light." -- Wow. Nice.

    A very cute poem, with some wicked lines, making it all the better. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is very interesting poem to read. I like the way you have stated the poem and the flow throughout the piece was good. Its again a superb poem by you worth max ratings. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Awwe. :]
    "Find me a smile you can place on my face;
    Though it won't be hard [just whisper in my ear]
    And find me a shortcut to a blessing, or maybe just your kiss. "
    ^^Best stanza.

    Amazing poem. Of course it doesn't compare with the one I just read. :] But, it's cutee. And, really goooood.
    keep it up, hun.

  • 16 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Wow, that was an amazing poem love. There are many cliche topics that billions of people feel the need to write about, but a lot of us put our own feelings and experiences in it, which makes it differ from the others. anyway 5/5 love.

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Mm. again beautiful poem. i like how its not terribly cliche. nicely, no sweetly, done.

    5/5.

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