Why Did I Trust You?

by Kristina   Jun 12, 2007


I can't believe I trusted you,
When you told me you loved me,
You said it was true,
You told me you would never leave me.

But where are you now?
Cause I'm all alone,
With just a broken heart
And memories of what I thought we had.

Everything you told me was lies.
I don't know why I even liked you,
Why I fell in love with you,
I shouldn't have, I wish I didn't.

Copyright © May 31, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Ok, well something i have noticed in your poems is that the endings arent very good
    but the whole content of the poem
    is great
    and then comes the ending and
    makes the poem down a level

    so a

    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    A beautiful and mournful poem. I loed the words and the message is clear. Very heartfelt piece. 5/5 all the way

    Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    The flow is much improved from the last peice I read.
    I liked it. I saw the point. And I like your structure.
    Sometime's truth does hurt. But one person's opinion isn't always the truth.
    Keep writting.
    Your poems are very enjoyable.
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Kristina,
    Some lines seemed awkward and I think that the topic that you chose was also fairly common, but that`s OK. How you described it was what counts. I think that if you made this poem just a little longer, you could have even more in it that made this poem stand out. Don`t get me wrong, this poem had a lot of emotion in it though. I don`t really have much else to say, but keep it up, and 4 out of 5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    >Wish upon a dream>

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Again, this has alot of emotion put into it, its kind of a sad poem to, i mean guys are just thinking "whos next" and girls are always thinking how long, 5/5 again, great work

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