ENDLESS FEELINGS (Acrostic)

by Cyma Khan   Jun 13, 2007


Eden up above waiting to open its door
Nothing but to enter upon in its glow
Daffodils dancing and singing the merry song
Love to be fulfilled our ways
Especially for those who felt the charm of love
Sunshines so bright on us today
Soothing one's heart with soft touches

Fulfilling the desire of love one
Esprit of blessed souls flying so high
Essence of the emotions we tasted so ever
Life with questions and answers
In or out its all about feeling good
Never the less where we end
Glistening nights to share
Smile is the bestowed for all we had

*********************************************
Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very nice poem.
    Only, I couldn't catch the flow very good, maybe when you rhyme a little more it is easyer to read?.. Anyway, further you used great words.
    I enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    Aww that was amazing. The reason why I finally decided to comment, Is well because you've always seemed to comment one of my new released poems. Lol. Endless feelings...Such a great poem full of passion ^_^ I miss you so much by the way Cyma...We've not spoken for a while yes? ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    I love your poem real sweet keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    Your descriptiveness is inviting and creates pretty good imagery. Your vocab is good and this overall, was a very refreshing read. Acrostics are hard at the best of times, and just a minor suggestion; Try to flow each line, matching them in with eachother. It makes the piece easier to understand and gives it a better flow. Well done though.

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Well done, great work on this poem.

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By Cyma Khan