The point of no return

by shadowknight   Jun 14, 2007


You caused it all,
you told me it was safe,
we are lost,
and can never escape.

Youve seen me cry,
You know my pain,
what more do you want?
My blood, my flesh, my death?

Were past the point of no return,
no backward glances,
its all about to end,
no final chances.

You could have stopped,
even thought ahead,
you promised saftey,
instead of leaving me for dead.

You talked of love,
you were consumed,
you should have known,
we were past the point of no return.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Just Jade

    Tsk ... phantom of the opera ... anyway i liked the direction u were taking with it, captain bruzer

  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Defiantely good..

  • 16 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Well...no you might be stuck with hmm...nehyour not stuck at all. I loved the word usage...it had brilliant imagery! If this is what you are when you're stuck for words...then I'd like to see what you'd write when you're not! ^^ Wow...I liked it quite a lot..

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I loved this one =) I think that it's fantastic and I totally understand what your saying in it ^_^ I give it a well deserved 5 =)
    Great job, Rhea

  • 16 years ago

    by shadowknight

    Well not my best work, im stuck for words, i need to find the place again....
    i got the idea off phantom of the opera....

    'were past then point of no return,
    no backward glances,
    the games we play till now are at an end.'

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