Fairy Eyes (Rictameter)

by Angie   Jun 14, 2007


Fairy Eyes

searching
precious newborn
put up for adoption
without your dear daddy's consent
grammy feels your presence, heart breaks
dreaming you, aching to hold you
beautiful baby with
sweet fairy eyes
searching

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Great poem. It is emotional and so sad. Very touching piece you said so much with a just few words. I am impressed!
    Well done...

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem is so touching and deep, also excellently written. You have great poetical skills.
    The ending is very effective.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very beautiful poem with strong lexis used and well adhered to the Rictameter rules. I like the way you have expressed the poem. Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    Aaah, this is heartbreaking. Beautifully written though with a really nice flow...

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Awww....Ang. what a powerful write!! This piece brought tears to my eyes. Very heartfelt and moving.

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