Im sorry

by MorbidCupcake   Jun 14, 2007


She is always running
From disaster thats become
And you have no clue about her
You dont think she matters

Her blood stained wrists
Cant make you worry
There is no way
She would hear an apology
Because you dont know the meaning of sorry

Its unfair
That you never cared
But shes the only one in such a mess
Shes the only one depressed

And its so unfair
That you told her you would stay
But left in less than a day
Without comforting her
And she has everything
While others are drowning
Waiting for a certain "Im sorry"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    For a topic which is some what cliche I think you did a good job with this. The flow seemed to be on task and you used simple words which were quite effective. The only thing that seemed to throw me off a little was the structure of this poem in other words your stanzas being of all different amount of lines. Other then that this was an emotion pact poem. Well done with this~mel