Letter To The Ones Who Never Cared

by marilyn marti   Jun 15, 2007


"This is a letter to the ones who never cared
If you are reading this it means I'm no longer there
I fought so hard to rise above the pain
But sometimes I felt flooded by all the constant rain
You all thought I was crazy I could tell by your tone
So I kept away, I kept myself all alone
Your words were torture, the worst of its kind
You thought it was funny to leave me behind
You thought you were better, that you were unique
The best looking, from head down to your feet
I didn't ask for beauty, to be accepted by the rest
I never wanted superiority, to be the very best!
But I tried my hardest, I tried to be wise
All you did was tease me, all I did was cry
What did you want, to feel you're so cool?
To feel like the the smartest, and I was the fool
Well no more complaining, you have all won
The only choice I knew of was to turn around and run
So thank you for the trouble, your menacing ways
You don't have to worry about me- now that I'm away
I hope you remember my blood and my name
You all should feel so stupid, most of all ashamed
Now that I'm gone, what was it all for?
Did you win some prize, or add points to a score?
You were the reason for my very last breath
So thank you for being the cause of my death.."

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  • 11 years ago

    by Omar

    Best poem i have read. Keep it up

  • 15 years ago

    by Raychel

    This is amazing, i love it

  • 15 years ago

    by ilu

    Awww...I love it...It's beautiful..
    Very well written...
    5/5..
    ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelvin Masi

    Hey this is a nice poem, i love it!! keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    Perfect balance , rhytmically faultless ..
    its not often that a sad/hurt poem is written this way . for me thats what makes it very special ... its poetry within poetry ( i think )
    i mean wow .. there a very raw emotion and obvious anger yet it flows so smoothly ..
    superb job !!

    paul x