Why Should I

by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX   Jun 15, 2007


Why should I love
When it only hurts
Why should I care
When I only get burned
Why shouldn't I breathe
When you walk by me
Why should I look
When I can't see
All of this pain
You've placed on me

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is such a strong piece. The use of the rhetorical questions was such a good idea. Very clever. Keep it up. Nik

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    You had a pattern going on using the words why & when, and the last two lines you abandoned it. Other than that, I really liked this poem. One of your best. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    The why's and everything got in the way of the feeling that this poem was suppose to give it was to repetitive. if you replaced those words this poem would bump up to a new level
    3/5
    kaila

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