One Minute Over Due (collab)

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Jun 16, 2007


60 seconds till your kiss
Let the countdown begin
Lets run down these sidewalks
To the places we've been

50 seconds till your kiss
And I can still remember when
We promised one another
We would be the best of friends

40 seconds till your kiss
Where did our time go
Our childhood memories
And all we used to know

30 seconds till your kiss
These things are running through my mind
I'm not ready to let go
And leave these memories behind

20 seconds till your kiss
And I'm not ready to accept
That these memories are ending
And they're all that I have left

10 seconds till your kiss
And this truth is sinking in
It's time to choose a sidewalk
That doesn't lead to where weve been

Now you're leaning in to kiss her,
I'm one minute over due
Left with words unspoken
And the things I wish you knew...

**collaboration with e LIZ a beth
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=149702

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Wow this poem is excellent!!! i wasn't exspecting it to end the way it did...but when it did it gave me goosebumps:)...you obviously have talent ...not only is your poem unique but it really captures a lot of emotions....well keep up the good work your doing great!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    This is rele good ,, i liked how u used time,,
    i liked this stanza the best:

    "10 seconds till your kiss
    And this truth is sinking in
    It's time to choose a sidewalk
    That doesn't lead to where weve been"

    great job! 5/5
    Janaynay

  • 16 years ago

    by Alice

    This is really really good.
    Really well written =]
    Welldone x

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    This is very well done. I deffinetly know where you are coming from.

  • 16 years ago

    by Valdo

    This is a very awesome and interesting poem i like the way it's written especially the countdown stuff

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