Hidden Lies

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Jun 20, 2007


Friends forever.
Two simple words.
So much meaning.
But is it an illusion?

Unbreakable bond.
An invisible string.
It carries such power.
Is there such a thing?

Complete understanding.
Comprehending every whim.
Trust and faith.
Is it all a myth?

Fairytales and make belief.
All stories with happy endings.
Faces constantly smiling.
But is this truly reality?

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  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    So very fairytale yet dark and slightly twisted. Do you get what I mean? It has an excellent flow. I like that it doesn't rhyme at all. Very good work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Misty

    Very cute but serious at the same time i like it alot

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    Okay, now this has a flow I can admire. Great meaning, an well written. My only critisim being the word, 'belief,' in that context it should be believe.

    Very good otherwise.

    ~Richi~

  • 16 years ago

    by Skulblaka Sverda

    Wow, it seemd like I am reading what's in my mind~ the hurt & pain of a lost friendship we share..........

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