Broken Flowers

by Wings Of Flames   Jun 20, 2007


Broken Flowers

Shattered in the storms,
Heart was sure to break,
Love lost in the lust,
Emotions born to fake,

Tears in the distance,
Another waking lie,
Broken flowers dying,
As the world starts to cry,

All is lost in death,
As they fall away,
My eyes always shimmer,
But they are here to stay,

The velvet on my pillow,
My body clothed and clean,
My wooden house of rest,
And the end of the obscene.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Wow... just wow. I'm blown away by your wording and the depth of it I can barely comprehend. The entire poem was an amazing hit and each verse held it's own. Bravo. 5/5.

    ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by Lindsay

    I loved this poem. It has a morbid beauty about it. I will definitely give a five to this piece. You have a lovely technique :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    I USED THE SAME TITLE FOR JENNA'S CONTEST!!! haha but i like your poem more then i like mine. tehe . you are truely a great writer. keep up the good work and you will be making a million books of your own. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Very nice poem.
    A great rhyming and I like the words you chose.
    Really enjoyed reading it.
    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Rhi

    I love the flow, such a beautiful piece, it's unbelieveably sad, yet so wonderful.

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