In a Perfect World

by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum   Jun 21, 2007


In a perfect world,
Nobody should have to experience darkness,
They should never have to experience loss,
Never experience grief or experience hatred.

However, this world less than perfect,
And we must all carry these burdens,
Some bare more than others,
Most people dwell upon the tragedies of their own lives,
For me however,
My fate is determined upon the tragedies of whom I love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very deep and true. Topic is excellent and title is great. You expressed emotions superbly. This poem could be in the life poems category. Anyway this piece really deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like the topic, I can relate to this poem. It is very deep and true, and you wrote it with many emotions within the words.

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    Good poem it was very truthfull and good keep it up
    ~danielle~

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "However, this world less than perfect,
    And we must all carry these burdens,"

    This poem was filled with alot of truth, because you are right, the world is far from perfect. Life is just rolled up into a ball of tragedy. Great poem hey.

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Well penned

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