That's The Deal

by Tricky Daze   Jun 22, 2007


Let this affective glamour glide;
Maybe you know the connection will decide
How long it will last but no matter what,
I want to be with you for you.

Heal my soul with words through years;
Be careful because life fulfilled it with fears
You will be the one no matter what,
I want to say yes, a gift from me to you.

Grow in my mind and teach me love;
As angels shove each other above
Your belonging isn't enough no matter what,
I want to steal you forever from you.

Shorten the way between you and my heart;
Then distances won't ever let us apart
That's the deal about us no matter what,
I want to compound my love with you.

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If you find it sweet and touching,please tell me what you think
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This combine of words are dedicated to my sweetheart Fsams..It's the first time I've ever written a poem for someone and It might sound cheesy.
But that's how much I want to love you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I like it and it was unique 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    I have read much of your poetry and find this to be one of your best i'm not sure if your on my favorites list but if your not thats where your going this dose not sound at all chessy and I love how you kept the same last two words in the last two lines of every stanza as well as rhyming the last teo words in the first two lines of each stnza this really caught my eye.

  • 16 years ago

    by SeGrAdA

    Such a sweet love poem.
    loved each sentence, keep it up
    u seem like a great poet
    gd luck dear
    nanz

  • 16 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    (pfft sorry that was really hard to understand hahahahah)

  • 16 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    Um i dont know how to explain it but, yes its sweet not as touching as sweet, but i get the message, but like.. how you always put like

    something something.. you type of thing it just doesnt like sound write...

    other than that it was really good.

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