Yummy.

by ALEX   Jun 22, 2007


Let my voice be sharp, so it cuts like a blade.
Your ego bruises won't fade for days.
I'll serve up the anger, sprinkled with pain.
Nothing is spared from my cruel disdain.
Topped with a healthy dose of cynicism, and
Just a dash of criticism...
Enjoy your just deserts.
I'm sorry if that hurt.
You took the main course with a smile,
Not tasting it's true flavor; lies.
The poison in your goblet must lay heavy on your heart.
This painful death does justice, 'cause you tricked me from the start.

6/22/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Dear this is a lexically powerful poem. The only thing I would suggest is breaking up the last two lines to two stanzas. Your word choice is beautiful and the flow is also nice. Kepp up the good work 5/5. God bless you

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by unknown

    It's nice, isn't it? ^^
    I love the ending, the last two lines.
    I can feel the emotion is this poem.
    And your words sound great too.
    Very nice poem. ^^
    Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Dang great job. I got a qestion though. How does this relate back to the title. I'm a little confused lol.
    -vino

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