Comments : Walk Before You Judge

  • 13 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "By looks alone you can' t tell a thing
    What matters is what' s deep within.

    Before judging every move, word, and style
    Take their shoes and walk at least a mile."

    The quote, "Don't judge a book by it's cover" really relates to this poem.
    My favorite part of the poem was how you took real life scenarios [sp?] to make people understand the whole point that the message contains. [Never judge someone based on their looks, etc.] Fantastic job. :] 5.5 You're a wonderful writer, keep it up!

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 13 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This poem seems like it has sterotypes but hey Dont jugde a book by its cover eh? this is a sweet lil story and i like it

  • 13 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh, another great poem by you dear, this was so amazing... as always your poems are so great.
    another 5/5 from me..

  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think everybody is a little to quick to judge sometimes but thats just the way it is, we'll always have those first thoughts of people no matter what. As we get older we realize that people are just people regardless of looks or how much money they have, we shouldn't be so quick to judge or put down what we don't understand. Amazing poem again 5/5 for sure GG23

  • 13 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this poem is great! You wrote a piece with really powerful and meaningful message. You picked good words and created amazing imagery through the poem.
    I totally agree with your opinion.
    5/5, but you deserve more for this piece

  • 13 years ago

    by White Chocolate Dynamite

    I loved it! Looks like its been awhile since you have published another poem, hope to see another one soon!

  • 13 years ago

    by claire

    This was such a great poem! you exposed exactly how most of us think - you totally nailed it =)

  • 12 years ago

    by fakesmile

    I luv diz poem.. obviously everyone can relate to it.. no one's perfect... and you can't judge someone until you truly know them..
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    Yeah i do agree wit your poem..nice one..keep it up..5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lemma

    This is an effing AWESOME poem. Again, the message behind it is one that people hear all too often but seem to never listen to. I love the way you introduce each person at the beginning and then explain them later on, it's a really effective structure. Love the ending as well. 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 12 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Amazing...if I hadn't read any of your other poems, this one would prove you have serious talent.More people need to read this and follow up on it.great g=write 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    This poem relates to everyone because everyone has been stereotyped, and you wrote how no-one should judge, it was powerfull and raw and amazing. It captured my attention and kept it.Awesome job.5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by David Ensor

    You are an old soul. your writing is like that good old home cooked meal from grandma, you know, fills you up and leave you hungry for more. I think the phrase i am looking for is comfort food. I am going to get fat reading your stuff...

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww I like this poem a lot
    I think that it was really good
    I really hate when people judge
    so it was a good poem for me
    everything was right on
    I loved the last stanza
    it tied it together beautifully
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Confessions

    Wow... it's AMAZING
    very meaningful
    Love it <333

  • 12 years ago

    by Confessions

    Ohh nd ofcorse it's gona be on my top favourite..it's beautiful

  • 12 years ago

    by Hidden1

    WOWWWW!!!!! I really like this poem so very much and I am sometimes guilty of judging a person by the way they look. You have made some really important points. You are an excellent poet and you have a very distinct way about getting your point across. Keep up the good work.

  • 5 years ago

    by Dominique

    I love this poem so much. My favorite lines would have to be
    "By looks alone you can't tell a thing
    what matters is what's deep within" and "Before judging them just by style, Take their shoes and walk a mile" because they are so true.