The wanted flight not given

by Spirit   Jun 30, 2007


Curse these grounded limbs
that bind me to the earth
curse these mortal bonds
that leave me with out worth

curse this fear, this horrible fear
that keeps me rooted here
curse this night this perfect night
which holds stars so bright and clear

curse the moon, that shines so bold
that no one can reach out and touch
curse the fact that I can not fly
for it's a skill I want so much

curse the birds that sleep so high
it's as if they're in a sky of sea
curse the life I'll never have
because I'm happy being me

curse my envious self
that wants the moon and stars
curse the ones who are lucky enough
for liking who they are

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Great work, this was a really pleasuable piece to read. The repetition had a great effect, and the flow was flawless. A good message the whole way through, and every line was so captivating...5/5 from me, I thought this was very orginal. Take care, keep writing, always and forever...

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Well writen 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    That was again, another amazing write! You have a lot of talent! I like your choice of words, and the repetition made the message more powerful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Amazing.

    I loved the repitition, it was effective in getting your message across. The flow was flawless and the message was clear. The last stanza was a perfect way to end the poem.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Ah, one more thing. You tend to use the word, 'so,' a lot.

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