What Do You Want?

by Loruhh   Jul 1, 2007


What do you want me to say?
What do you want me to do?
I just dont seem to understand you like I use to.
You drive me crazy
As you say you want me
Your just breaking me apart
Cause I can see right through you
Your just useing me
To get closer to her
And your just riping me apart
Like you use to, and you still do
If this is what love is like
Then I wish it would go away
Its tearing me up inside, as I try to keep it all together
But it has its own way of letting go and losing all hope
Its how its been treated all its life and now it has no way of gaining back its respect
But some how, after all this you do, I cant seem to let you go.

~Its not the best poem I have made but I had all of this stuck in my head an really had to let it out!~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Darlena

    This was an emotion-felt poem. I like it. Although it's not really the best poem, but it's ok. Keep up the wonderful work.

    Feel free to comment some of my poems.

    *DARLENA*

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    Sometimes its the poems that just burst from head to paper that are the best.
    They are always so full of pure emotion and i find those the best to read.
    This is an example of them =)
    You should be proud of it
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This was alright. The last couple of stanzas were a bit long, try shortening them. Other than that the flow was good. Most can relate to this. Keep it up!

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