Losing you...

by Monica AKA Mika   Jul 1, 2007


Lying in bed just waiting for your call,
Wishing that you would forgive me and just forget it all...

All the words i can say to make you see how i feel,
That wouldn't even be enough, they are more then that-they are real...

Real pain, Real mistake, Real guilt..thats what it is,
I don't want to lose you baby i never wanted that damn kiss...

Kiss...he kissed me-while I'm with you.,
If i could go back and fix it- thats exactly what I would do!

Do you still feel the same for me-Will you still be there?
I need you in my life baby I'm nothing if you don't care.

Care for me please, stay here with me please...don't just leave me alone
Please just at least call me or answer your phone.

Phone-thats what i have been staring at for about 2 hours,
But i wish i could see you because what I'm feeling is more then words

Words-the little things I've been thinking of saying to you,
But i cant even say anything-theres nothing i can even do!

Do you have any idea what I'm going through,
My eyes are swollen from crying over the thought of losing you!

You- are all i ever wanted, all i ever needed and now that i have you-
My greatest fear is and always will be....losing you....

[Note: Notice that I used the last word to start out the next stanza in each line...]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Javier

    This has got to be my favorite poem out of all the ones that i read so far, i love the way you started off every new stanza with the last word you used in the stanze before it, your great!

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    You seem to be able to work really well with emotions although when it comes to the structure and the flow they seem a bit off. None the less again the emotions that were portrayed made up for it. I'm sure many people can relate to this poem so you didn't just write this for you or your boyfriend you wrote it for many other individuals who would also be feeling the same way in a certain situation. A good effort. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Once again, I like what's written. It comes from the heart, and leaks desperation, desire, guilt and love. I really like that mix of emotions in there.

    It was a good poem. I enjoyed the read.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem is full of hurt. it flowed very nicely. although i was a bit confsed at times with the way i had to read it, it was still a great poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Nice touching wording too it was just a good poem all in all :) keep it up monica/mika...

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