Are You sure you love me??

by XxBrokenInsidexX   Jul 2, 2007


I cant do this
all i feel for you is friend
relationship for us sounds strange to me
but you keep saying you'll love me to the end

yeah i couldn't picture my life without you
but its when i look at our future its friend i see
nothing more to it
I'm sorry

yeah you mean the world to me
and ill do anything to see you smile
but i think its just a phase
just sit and think for a while

are you sure you really love me
or are you just going through another strange phase
i don't know
but i think we shouldn't talk for a few days

lets just take time to clear or minds
and when we meet again
if we feel the same way
then maybe we it could be feeling more than friends

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    So much feeling and emotions within this piece. Great job, 5/5. Em x

  • 16 years ago

    by sheila

    Wow

  • 16 years ago

    by Joseph

    While your content and feels is pretty strong, you still have to mentain the idea that this is a poem. your writting comes out too much as a conversation than it is a poem. but again excellent content and definate true feeling

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Excellent poem. I am more interested in content than structure. This poem has enduring quality and covers what many must go through. This honest poem would speak to many if they would take the time to read it.

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