Caught In The Past

by Brittany C   Jul 2, 2007


Blinded by a bright future,
she looks to the past.
For the comfort of the known.

Afraid of what may come in
the many days yet to live.
Never moving forward; silent.

So caught up that days
pass by her unnoticed; lost.
Turning into dark lonely years.

Life passed her in a flash.
Noticed only by loved ones
that once tried to help her.

But now just watch helplessly.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Blinded by a bright future,
    she looks to the past.
    For the comfort of the known.

    Fave lines ^^

    5/5 according to me. Wonderful poem. It's amazing how much you can do with so little words. Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem, I can relate to it.
    Wording is excellent, I really enjoyed in it. My favorite lines are:
    -
    Blinded by a bright future,
    she looks to the past.
    For the comfort of the known.-

    Well done, 5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    This kind of has the same concept of time passing us by in it, i like that the ending was just the one line, really showed a finishing point, 5/5 xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    I don't think I have ever read anything like this before. This is unique and absolutely amazing. "For the comfort of the known." That line is so true, it would have to be my favourite line. Well done on a wonderful poem.
    5/5, but you sure do deserve more
    .x

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