Fear....

by Solus   Jul 3, 2007


Fear does strange things....

She gave all she could, her heart all but his.
Life was killing him, his mind going with a pop and fiz.
He wanted all she had, but gave little back.
How many times,everyday she came never losing track.
Knowing what he was, trying always to hide.
Her words so beautiful, they never lied.
Too late now, they can't save this dance.
He'd try for now, if but given the chance.
His sobs ever echo, but its all for naught.
Its over now, fears prey is caught.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I love this poem and I like how you show how some relationships really are. I like how you express the man's fear in this and in the end he let's go but it's too late. I love it and this is so true.

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    That was truly great and depressing nice depth loved that part 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.