Kissing The Lipless

by Tricky Daze   Jul 4, 2007


Light reflects a huge discreetness for me to
Another pitiless day that fate entrusted me to you
Without any fear that I can barely say:
Loving you without any doubt is like kissing the lipless

You made your dark hypocrite contaminate,
Never knew your compassion would terminate
Nothing after that can keep my words away;
Being within your soul is like loving the heartless

Craved for a warm embrace or just a kiss,
Receiving some love from you would be vital bliss
Sick of being in need of you but now what Ray?
Waiting for you is like expecting thoughts from a brainless

Vowed this piece of paper to you and loveless nights,
Now leaving you with bruises from our fights
All you have to understand is to make it your way;
Trying to keep our passion alive is like reviving the lifeless

-My likely worst...but please vote and comment it..It would mean a lot-

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I loved the uniquness and description of this poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by shade127

    Some of the words I could not understand why you pieced them together but it made the poem very interesting. Well done.

    PEACE and BLESSINGS
    ~Shade127

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Again, wonderful imagery. You write such descriptive pieces. Although, the flow here, I feel was a bit choppy. Nonetheless 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    I love this poem and the writing style you used you say likely your worst well then your worst is better than my best i particularly love this stanza

    Vowed this piece of paper to you and loveless nights,
    Now leaving you with bruises from our fights
    All you have to understand is to make it your way;
    Trying to keep our passion alive is like reviving the lifeless

    i also like that it doesn't rhyme to much
    alot of rhyming in poems makes its sound forced but the way you rhymed the first two lines in every stanza made it seem easily written

    i give it 5/5 for true beauty

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Once again you say one of your worst but the quality is very good, the word choice and imagery were amazing. I love the title and the first stanza it really captures the reader. Great job 5/5 GG23

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