A Beginning

by debbylyn   Jul 5, 2007

Eyes consumed by soul's decree
Tender kisses ignite desire
Fingertips blush in fountain's light
Lake breeze fanning sunset's fire

Holding peace in aching arms
Whispered breaths thy gentle hollow
Lulled by drum-beat lullaby
True lover's dreams to follow

Swells entreat an endless sea
Bides a heart's true song
Teardrops spilling sadness waves
Prayers to Heaven drift along


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  • 16 years ago

    by Diana Hughes

    Yet again, wonderful work! love it! xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Seems it just gets better and better......
    beautiful words and deeply memorable content..... imagery??? To live is to dream
    to dream is to live......seems you have taken me.........to another place.

    beautifully written...by an angel of word

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautiful word choice and flow. Excellent job as always!!

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Well, I must say, diana has done you an injustice, lol. She suggested I find you, and read.. but I didn't realise that I'd find another who can use words in the way that she does. You make this sound so romantic, and so pretty, just to be.. Very well done, at such magical, beautiful imagery. xx

  • Wow. this is beautiful. it gave me this beautiful schene in my head. keep it up.